New Query

So I've written an updated query letter that clarifies some of the plotlines in my novel. I'm not sure if it's any better, but at least it's different. I took out the Twilight Zone and Nancy Drew reference and changed mystery to novel. I think it reads better, though I'm still not happy with it. Chapter 12 needs more work than I thought. I need to make some small changes to it. I'm almost done with the rewrite. I'm looking forward to moving on. I wasn't as productive today as I'd like to be, but I'm hoping tomorrow I'll get a lot accomplished. I have a big match tomorrow with Steve. I really want to win so that Tyrone, Tom and I battle it out for the number one seed. I should beat Steve tomorrow if I play smart, play my game, avoid making mistakes and keep the ball low. That's the key, keeping the ball low. Keep my serves low and my attitude strong!